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Posted 31 July 2010 - 05:32 AM

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Posted 31 July 2010 - 11:32 AM

hey there,

not sure what to say for C&C but i didnt notice the fourth guy on the right side until 30 seconds later :(
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Posted 31 July 2010 - 06:18 PM

I know sprite renders aren't the best of quality renders, but some of the things around them look way over sharpened. So I would work on that. I like the effect and the flow the of the effects. The composition is nice over all. The glows are not too shabby either. The main problem here like I said before is a bit too much sharpness which turned some of the effect to look choppy.
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Posted 31 July 2010 - 10:01 PM

Agree with comments above about oversharpening. What bothers me even more tho is the multiple focals, which I think is what the first commenter was getting at. A tag should draw the viewers eyes to the focal, and when you have more than one focal...especially spread out like this...its just distracting and hard to really appreciate the art.
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Posted 31 July 2010 - 10:45 PM

The effects are cool except for them being oversharpened and bright(it's hard to see some of the sprites). I would recommend using only one focal per tag. And the sprite on the right is hard to see since it's blending in too much with the bg.
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Posted 01 August 2010 - 03:12 AM

It's been a long time since i last saw a sprite tag, too strong contrast imo but nice concept. Not a fan but good job.
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